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Narrator
Bexja

(you)

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Cast

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Cinnamon Milkfoot
(you)
Fig Cuddleicicle
(you)
Hickory
(you)
Mattias Starsoul
(you)
Nutella Candypop
(you)
Peppetmint Plumwine
(you)
Randolph
(you)
Santa’s baby
(you)
Trixie Wigglestar
(you)
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Chapter , Scene 2 Final Scene Act Ⅲ, Scene 2

Challenges
Obstacle
Jackalopes Connection...

The Jackalope agrees to help.

For some reason, this Christmas, many of the Jackalopes of the world are connected by an invisible virtual network…

Jack, or, as it turned out, Cookie, was able to access this network, and “speak” to all the Jackalopes across the world (except a few who were on mute) … indeed, through the marvels of modern technology, the full gang could speak and interact with them…

Mattias Starsoul
Mattias Starsoul (you)(CraftmasterMatt) chose a new Subplot card: Subplot Save The Holidays (and possibly the world)
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Randolph
Randolph (youS3CR3T_GR1M01R3) moved
Obstacle
Jackalopes Connection...
Strength
Creative

Randolph approached Nutella and the jackalope. The jackalope seemed to recognize Randolph, and as he came closer, invisible threads seemed to connect to his mind.

“Oh, hey Randolph! This is Cookie-Cookie the Jackalope- some Christmas magic enchanted your snow sculpture, and now I think we’ve got a connection with most of the jackalopes in the world!” Nutella piped enthusiastically.

“That’s good. Have you explained… our whole situation yet?”

What… situation?

Randolph whipped his head around to see where the voice came from.

Sorry, this is Cookie. You made me, correct?

Randolph turned to the jackalope and nodded.

Well, I appreciate it. Can you tell me about your situation?

“I don’t know how you guys- all the jackalopes- have this communication network, but we think that your master is so deep into modern technology that they’re trying to thwart the traditional ways of Christmas, and the warmth we’re trying to send to children around the world. I don’t know if you’re in on it or not, but they’re trying to convert all this warmth and love into cold, online G.I.F.T.S. . At this point, stealing all the gifts away would be better than to replace them all with these intangible-no, nonfungible tokens!

The jackalope seemed to be silent for a while, absorbing all the information. Everything was so silent, for a second Randolph could hear the snowflakes falling onto the ground.

Mattias Starsoul
Mattias Starsoul (youCraftmasterMatt) moved
Obstacle
Jackalopes Connection...
Subplot
Save The Holidays (and possibly the world)
strong outcome weak outcome CraftmasterMatt won control of the story by completing this challenge with a strong outcome.

“It’s simple, and yet not simple at the same time. Our adversary believes that they can ruin Christmas by turning every present from Santa into something as meaningless and intangible as an NFT.”

“They’re using you- not only you, but your friends and family to facilitate this scheme. With your ability to pass along signals, you can put this entire plan into motion, or stop it in it’s tracks.”

“And if you can ping the entire network, pass along a trackable signal for me, I can put an end to that scheme at it’s source. And everything that the adversary has worked so hard to achieve will come crashing down.”

“Are you going to let someone use you as a weapon to make others miserable?” Matt asked, rhetorically.

The narrator continued the scene
Challenges
Obstacle
Santa's Special Gift

The Jackalope recognised that what they were involved with went against the total spirit of Christmas. It was only Matt explaining it that let them see exactly what was going on.

Cookie gave Matt what he needed, so he could block the signals, and make the fiendish plot fail.

The delivery of Christmas gifts was like a blur.

They hardly had time to think - but they remembered some of their adventures as the glimpsed places they had visited.

Santa’s crew acted as a great team - and all around them, other teams of elves were helping out. Local agents were on the ground, making sure everything went smoothly.

Some of the routes had been planned out by them - they had a greater appreciation of the whole thing, having been so involved and so aware of Santa’s role.

They were hardly aware of the hours passing, so busy were they. Of course, they followed the night time round the globe. They got into a rhythm of following the plan and acting like a huge bucket-chain of gifts. Picking up gifts from strategic collection points, and whizzing them round by the most efficient route.

The robot hands were not a problem. They whirred and clicked - but they got no signals. They did not grab gifts like some sort of weird arcade grabber. They did not make off with them and print out meaningless tokens to sit in their place.

Of course, very few people even knew the peril which had been so close to destroying Christmas.

But Santa knew…

Fig Cuddleicicle
Fig Cuddleicicle (youBexja) moved
Obstacle
Santa's Special Gift
Strength
Humble

Santa was pleased with the team for preventing the disaster before it actually happened.

A load of kids were left with strange, claw-like robots that did not do much - and a heap of much more interesting toys and gifts!

And Fig knew this at first hand - because they were invited to lead the delivery team on Santa’s own sleigh!

Fig had been second-in-command a couple of times on one of the back-up sleighs, but never before the great honour of leading deliveries on the boss bobsled! The rooftops had never seemed so magnificent!

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Mattias Starsoul
Mattias Starsoul (youCraftmasterMatt) moved
Obstacle
Santa's Special Gift
Weakness
Serious

Matt had successfully foiled the plot to disrupt Christmas. Not alone, of course- he had his new friends to thank for that.

And as the holidays wrapped up, and Matt finished tying up loose ends in regards to the effort- mostly by hot-patching the robots so they were unable to receive further updates, and then, to turn these loose-ends into a fancy, festive bow, made the hands dance to any christmas music they heard.

Of course he was present for The Big Day, and escorted Santa on his uneventful flight.

Of course there were still other things that needed to be attended to- the data fortress where the G.I.F.Ts were supposed to be kept was still up and running, as were the supposed gift digitalization sites. It would probably take quite a while for him to dismantle them all.

But he did maintain- very thoroughly -his present role as Santa’s bodyguard, and protector of the holidays across the multiverse.

After all was finally said and done, Matt paid a visit to his friends, and bid them all farewell. He had to get back to his other job- being a part-time hero for worlds without.

Nutella Candypop
Nutella Candypop (youNutellaPop) moved

Well, it was certainly something. Nutella wasn’t sure what. She wasn’t really even sure how - the frosty adventure of creepy hands, strange boxes, and misnamed Jackalopes came to be. But Christmas was over, and Nutella knew that. After waving Matt goodbye, she sat quietly on a rooftop at the North Pole, gazing happily at the jolly scene before her.

She supposed now that Christmas time was over, they were now beginning the next year’s preparations. Hopefully, no robots this time. Really.

They maintained peace, and that was enough for Nutella. Maybe next Christmas would be more uneventful. Maybe next Christmas they’ll encounter an interdimensional snow-monster intent on flooding the world with hot chocolate.

But now, Nutella only wanted to drink her hot chocolate.

The narrator ended the scene
Challenges Cards

None

At last, Kringle City was silent, but for snoring. What followed was the longest period of inactivity for several months. In the stillness, there was a great satisfaction. Christmas had been kept, for another year, and they had grown more aware and more fond of its importance than ever.

The end.

This story has reached its conclusion. Congratulations!

Commentary

Bexja (narrator) (host) (You):
This is the penultimate challenge. You can rope Santa in, if you wish. After this, we will wrap things up, and there will be just one more move for you to bring your character's story to a conclusion... [delete]
01/04/2023
Bexja (narrator) (host) (You):
Thanks all for your parts in this very fun game. I've enjoyed the twists and turns. This is the final challenge, which allows you to wrap up the story for your character... Have a great New Year! [delete]
01/06/2023
Bexja (narrator) (host) (You):
I will leave this open for another day or two for any cardless moves, and then I will end the story! [delete]
01/08/2023
Bexja (narrator) (host) (You):
Thanks all for a brilliant game. My rough plan was changed a couple of times because of innovative directions players took with moves, which made the story really special! In a way I wish we did not slightly rush the ending; but as it is seasonal it kind of has to be that way, and there are benefits to pushing a story through! Hope to write with you again really soon! [delete]
01/09/2023
NutellaPop (narrator) (host) (You):
Thank you for hosting, @Bexja! This was a really fun game to play, and I'm glad to have played in it. Happy (late) Holidays :) [delete]
01/09/2023
CraftmasterMatt (narrator) (host) (You):
Happy Belated Holidays and Merry Belated Christmas! [delete]
01/09/2023
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