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Narrator
Monkeykins117

(you)

(switch)

Cast

None yet.

A.I. Aires
(you)
(switch)
Conner Asker
(you)
(switch)
Khrstov Jemona
(you)
(switch)
Lila
(you)
(switch)
Lt. Christian Kyle
(you)
(switch)

Chapter 1, Scene 1 Act , Scene 1 • 02/21/2015

Challenges
Character
Commander Ahigo
Place
Galactic Space Trade Station

Four chosen, four came, four heading in the same direction, a path unknown.
The party gathers in the main Com. Center for the communing planets, a high- tech space station more commonly used for trade but now decked out in every type of battle preparation tech possible. The man that made it happen was Commander Ahigo of the Planetary Trade, who decided to come together for the defence of the Moon and maybe more. He was put in charge and brought the party together.
As the four stepped into the room, he turned to greet you. His eyes reflected the four, the metal walls, glowing lights, and people surrounding you. The first thing he said was, “If I asked you to die, would you?”

Conner Asker
Conner Asker (youNicklien) moved • 02/22/2015
Character
Commander Ahigo
Weakness
Fear

The room was surrounded in hush murmuring. It was Conner who answer the Commander’s question first.

“Depends, what would I be die doing?” He asked the Commander in a confident tone, but truthful was scarred of dying. He shook nervously after the question. He had a flashback of the time of when he almost did die.

Smoke, and fire were everywhere. The broken glass dome releasing all the air the plants made, and he was smashed underneath a ton of metal structure that once his lab. Those monster destroyed it. The chance to turn the moon into a New Earth. Before he could think another thing about it he was snapped back into his surroundings by the Commander’s response.

“Fighting.”

Lt. Christian Kyle
Lt. Christian Kyle (youCixtian) moved • 03/08/2015
Character
Commander Ahigo
Strength
Cutting Wit

The large man in fatigues rolled his eyes as the commander asked the question. Leadership took more than the willingness for idiots to jump off cliffs cause a bigger idiot said so.

“Yeah…” He said and his focus came to pin prick clarity. “I’d -follow- you anywhere.”

Khrstov Jemona
Khrstov Jemona (youLinkUnleashed) moved • 03/09/2015
Character
Commander Ahigo
Subplot
Orders

The Russian in the dark corner in black robes just shrugs and with an expression that just says ,”i dont care or wanna be here”, responds.

“Honestly, i dont care. If you give me the orders,ill try to carry em out. No questions asked.”

Lt. Christian Kyle
Lt. Christian Kyle (youCixtian) moved • 03/09/2015

Christian rolled his eyes at the words that came from the Russian dignitary. The gesture faded into a slow shaking of his head.

“Well that’s rea-fucking-suring…” He glanced back at the robed man, gave him a disdainful once over, then back to the commander. “Maybe the red meat didn’t quite understand the nature of this dilemma, sir.”

He then turned back to squarely look at Khrstov.

“And ‘Not Caring’ is absolutely –NOT- a goddamend option, OK Sonya…” he said crossing tattooed arms over massive chest. “You either ride with us, or collide with us… savvy?”

Khrstov Jemona
Khrstov Jemona (youLinkUnleashed) moved • 03/09/2015

“Pssh, whats your problem? I know my nation has had lots of complications with yours in the past, which i took no part in, but that doesnt mean I am like them. I was forced to work in the mines,to feed my family. I hate my nation too for what they did to all the Civs in New Russia. So dont get all snappy with me. I hope we can cooperate in the near or far future. I will take any order, even if it means life or death. I only wish to unite our kingdoms and settle all our differences.”

He shuts up,and mistakably shows his weak side,which he tries to hide under his tough guy act.

Lt. Christian Kyle
Lt. Christian Kyle (youCixtian) moved • 03/10/2015

At the first bits of the tirade, Christian opened his mouth to rebut, but the Russian just kept on pontificating. It was as if someone had pressed the patented ‘Play’ button, and he wouldn’t stop until his pre-recorded message was done.

When Khrstov finally finished Christian looked perplexed, and glanced at the commander, then at the others gathered.

“Are yo… is he…” He looked at Lila, with a quizzical look on his face. “Is he serious?”

He seemed a bit ill at ease, and unsure of what to do with himself, so he did what all big dumb jocks should do in such circumstances… he snickered, and tried to laugh it off, walking away shaking his head.

“Whaaat ever, doood”
Commentary
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Dont forget to invite austin [delete]
01/30/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
If I don't get another character by the end of the week I will just make one to fill the space. [delete]
02/10/2015
Tyurru (narrator) (host) (You):
Okay, but the game is pretty recent right? high chance someone will join by then. [delete]
02/10/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
it was up before but i just put it back up [delete]
02/10/2015
Tyurru (narrator) (host) (You):
Welcome to Nicklien [delete]
02/13/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
So we have a Russian, Asian, American, and greek/american [delete]
02/14/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
I need to practice my russian text and insults [delete]
02/14/2015
Tyurru (narrator) (host) (You):
Hmm okay, it looks like this story isn't about to start up anytime soon, sorry guys was hoping for something with a bit more speed to it, but no doubt someone more fitting will come and fill my spot. Best of luck everyone!. [delete]
02/18/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
I was hoping to start today, so sorry guys, but now that Tyurru left, could you wait one more day? I'm so sorry!!!! If no one joins I will make one and start it up emedietly [delete]
02/18/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
I'll be starting it up tomorrow. [delete]
02/20/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Ill see what everyone else says,then ill move so that i at least have an idea to write [delete]
03/01/2015
Nicklien (narrator) (host) (You):
Whelp, Sorry to leave guys thought someone else would have moved by now, I am going to hand Conner off to the narrator. [delete]
03/03/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
do you guys still want to do this because like Nicklien kinda pointed out, this has gone no where fast... [delete]
03/03/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
Hello? [delete]
03/07/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Hi. We are still trying to figure out what to do [delete]
03/07/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
You just need to to tell the commander your own response. It can fit your strength, I don't care how you play it off, just show your character off. [delete]
03/07/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
And does anyone want Nickleins character? I can retire or reassign him. Up to you guys. [delete]
03/07/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
I know the picture i chose is from destiny,and there are 3 characters in it,but mine is the center one. I tried to find a decent pic but couldnt,so its all i got [delete]
03/09/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
Looks good, @LinkUnleashed... I'm hoping that (And let me know if you're on board with this), your character and my character form a weird, uneasy camaraderie. In classic 'Bigotry' fashion, he's decided that he doesn't like russians... but now that he can actually meet one, and put his life on the line with one... that attitude can change. :) What do you think? [delete]
03/09/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Its a possibility. Russians really dont like any country but themselves. It will take em a while to warm up to everyone [delete]
03/09/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
but we can [delete]
03/09/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Just read your move. All i have to say, that was really frackin harsh. My guy is only ment to carry out orders,and to be silent and quiet. I do have the friends strength card,so i hope i can at least get along with someone [delete]
03/09/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
Well, at this point, the last person I think that should really finish it off is @zoesha, so if she moves we're all good. I might make Aires move for the heck of it when she's done. We'll see... [delete]
03/09/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
No, @LinkUnleashed. Chris is being really harsh right now because he isn't sure what's expected of him, or what to expect of the others. I promise, it wont be hard for Khrstov to thaw him out. He's just being a bit of a dick head. I promise... it's not that deep... he's really a good guy. [delete]
03/10/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Couldnt tell if that last move was a warming up move or a still hatred move [delete]
03/10/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
It's like this. Initially it was a misdirected anger, coupled with his own gung-ho attitude about the war. His uber patriotic upbringing taught him how to hate Russians, but it never prepared him for the fact that Russians are people. Christian is a good guy, but he's comically gung-ho and militaristic. It's a quirk, but his hatred is feigned, because he really has no real world experience outside of the training he did in Neo Brunswick, on Mars. [delete]
03/10/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
The way I read Khrstov, he seems a bit sheltered, and doesn't seem any more comfortable in these situations than Christian. (I read that from the way he kind of strung all his responses to Christian together in one long paragraphs.) [delete]
03/10/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
Christian doesn't hate him, and would feel bad if he knew that the way he acted, hurt Khrstov's feelings, or made him uneasy. First contacts are hard, but they can be fun. [delete]
03/10/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
SO in summary, Chris was basically confused, as Khrstov didn't react in any way that Christian had expected. But in a silly attempt to save face he kind of shruged and said what ever. It's obvious though that he's a little embarrased. [delete]
03/10/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
Well as long as it doesn't affect you guys in the real world, i think its a great side story. And are either one of you willing to take Nicklien's character? I really dont wanna ditch the character after one move [delete]
03/10/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Ok. I originally wanted to do a Mother Russia joke guy but i can do that in battle to sound tough,and as a joke [delete]
03/10/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
And im not sure if i wanna handle 2 characters. Its bad enough @Monkeykins117 that your brother wants me to take over one of the stories hes running [delete]
03/10/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
Well if no one wants him I can take over him and just have A ires break down at some point. [delete]
03/10/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
I'll try to get @zoeysha to move again, but if she doesn't I can talk to her personally. [delete]
03/10/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Does she go to school with you? [delete]
03/10/2015
Monkeykins117 (narrator) (host) (You):
yas.... [delete]
03/11/2015
Cixtian (narrator) (host) (You):
hey guys, I'm gonna bow out of this game. It's moving far too slow for my taste. [delete]
03/12/2015
LinkUnleashed (narrator) (host) (You):
Aww [delete]
03/12/2015
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