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Narrator
ghinkhawara

(you)

(switch)

Cast

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A.L.I.C.E
(you)
Carlos Bassief~ C-Bass
(you)
Imp
(you)
Manticore
(you)
Rath “Mad Rat” Jones
(you)
Sergeant Jack Crassus
(you)
Commentary

OneWheelSam (narrator) (host) (You):
Oh. Um... Ruuuuunnn!!! [delete]
08/02/2014
ragepancakes (narrator) (host) (You):
So essentially Cbass is shooting through the like 4by2 inch view panel at the front of your standard tank [delete]
08/02/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
I should note the tank is moving left from his perspective, so he's shooting through it at a sharp angle. [delete]
08/02/2014
ragepancakes (narrator) (host) (You):
yeah thats kind of what i had figured. meaning he cant actually see anyone but he can tell theres an opening [delete]
08/03/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
For reference, the tank has a sophisticated built-in radar system that would tell whoever can see the output monitor where even the stealth team are. This means that anyone in the tank could tell the gunner where to shoot, or he could just look himself. The soldiers in the tank aren't using nightvision, the tank has it built-in. This doesn't really affect your move, but I mention it because it might come up later and there seemed to be confusion. [delete]
08/03/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
For reference, in the M1 tank the commander and the gunner has a night vision, the driver's night vision sensor is optional (http://science.howstuffworks.com/m1-tank5.htm). The ghinkhawara's tank seem to be more computerized than that. [delete]
08/03/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
Thats a very helpful link, thanks. Let's say everybody except the loader if there is one has access to the radar view and infrared. Regardless, the gunner's not looking so hot right now. [delete]
08/03/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
Sure thing. Edited. [delete]
08/03/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
Kagemaru656, that was... gross. : ) Reminds me of how Mace Windu destroyed a couple of ships in Shatterpoint. [delete]
08/03/2014
Kagemaru656 (narrator) (host) (You):
A nice bit of precision telekinesis ;) Imp will be feelign quite feeble though after that [delete]
08/03/2014
mrseeker (narrator) (host) (You):
Nice :D [delete]
08/03/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
Nice work, unfortunately I think this mission's going to be sort of like a Final Destination movie until Oke dies. [delete]
08/03/2014
Kagemaru656 (narrator) (host) (You):
I figured, but I felt like a cool tank-splosion was needed :P [delete]
08/03/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
It was a nice touch. [delete]
08/03/2014
ragepancakes (narrator) (host) (You):
Maybe an emp will fry oke [delete]
08/03/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
BTW, next time you blow a tank spend some psi to ensure the breech is open, might not work otherwise. [delete]
08/04/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ns5NJVa_XKo 1:10-1:25 shows breech opening and closing. [delete]
08/04/2014
OneWheelSam (narrator) (host) (You):
Just caught up.. That was well cool! Such good writing guys and girls! [delete]
08/04/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
Soooo, did rat just forget about the nuke? Or was he disagreeing with the nuke part as well? [delete]
08/05/2014
Artemciy (narrator) (host) (You):
Trust me, it's much easier to blow a nuke than to shoot a few people in the face. But yeah, Rat would've tried a nukeless 100% stealth angle first. [delete]
08/05/2014
ghinkhawara (narrator) (host) (You):
I do not doubt it. [delete]
08/05/2014
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